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Michael Edward's avatar

That was creepy. Really gripping and well-written, but still creepy. I really liked the way the first sentence just hooked me. And I was on the edge of my seat reading the last paragraph. Great stuff bro. :)

Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Thank you, bro! I missed your comments. I’m glad you liked it and that it gave you something :-)

Michael Edward's avatar

It definitely gave me something — that special feeling we hope for when reading. :)

MaKenna Grace's avatar

Ooh I know that feeling all too well. It never really settles either. Even when the immediate threat is gone it still puts everything on edge.

Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Some things just change you forever. Like if you're in a crash and make it out okay. You'll never drive the same again.

MaKenna Grace's avatar

I can definitely relate there.

Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

Yep. That's why I now live in deep rural France lol.

Except there's lots of dead branches out here. Uh-oh.

Michael B. Morgan's avatar

As long as there are no eyes… but be careful, double-check everything.

Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

Well, if all else fails, I have a scythe...

A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Yes, that feeling of being watched... You're creeping me out with this!

Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Thanks, A.C! Glad you liked.

Jeannine Lawall's avatar

That was quite the story! And a fantastic drawing to go with it...

Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Thanks, Jeannine!