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Charlotte Pendragon's avatar

Surprise ending! At least the stinky bugs disappeared! 😖😄 Wonderful Michael!

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Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Let's hope we don't all end up with cell phones where our hearts should be!

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Michael Edward's avatar

How freaky. Very eerie and strange and interesting— just what I’ve come to expect from you, Michael :)

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Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Thanks, bro!

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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

Delicious!

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Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Thanks, Evelyn!

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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

Of course now I'm wondering how he got the damn thing inside him in the first place, and there is definitely a story in there.

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Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Hahaha, yeah, I guess so. You could write that. I'd love to read it ;-)

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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

Hmm. I may take you up on that challenge. I'd get to write something seriously messy, possibly involving nefarious deep state experimenters/scientists pretending to be grey alien abductors. Or something. It definitely has to be messy.

I will set a part of my brain onto the task and get back to you...

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Michael B. Morgan's avatar

C'mon, go! It'll be funny :-)

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

A fantastic piece of work! Really great atmosphere throughout, and the ending is very clever... 😎👍

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Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Thanks, Chris!

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Steve Kelsey's avatar

Cracking post!

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Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Thanks, Steve. Glad you like it!

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