So creepy, brilliantly done! Loved the imagery - "twin circles of pale bone", Milly "like a pale gecko". And the "BIG BANG" line - a parallel universe suddenly instantiating? I did not expect the twist that came, nice one!
So trippy! I don’t know what I was expecting, but when I read that there were two John’s I was totally intrigued and surprised. It made for a fantastic twist. And the idea at the end about the doppelgänger effect is equally intriguing!
So creepy, brilliantly done! Loved the imagery - "twin circles of pale bone", Milly "like a pale gecko". And the "BIG BANG" line - a parallel universe suddenly instantiating? I did not expect the twist that came, nice one!
Thanks, Caitriana! I enjoyed writing those details, and I'm glad you picked up on them. Thank you so much :)
The atmosphere was so weird. I read the second part with this strange mix of awe and uneasiness.
Thanks, bro!
So trippy! I don’t know what I was expecting, but when I read that there were two John’s I was totally intrigued and surprised. It made for a fantastic twist. And the idea at the end about the doppelgänger effect is equally intriguing!
Great stuff Michael :)
I find the doppelgänger effect fascinating. Even from a psychological angle. Thanks, bro!
I totally agree! It’s a trip. I’d love to run into one of my doppelgängers just to see how it made me feel. :)
The doppelgänger twist was really nice but sad that John died.
Please make Part 3, I need to know what happens to the Millys lol
My wife asked me same :)
Creepy and superb! And definitely continuing with the dark Twilight Zone vibe.
I like the parallel worlds intersecting idea. Obviously I do a lot of that myself.
Will there be a part 3?
There isn't a Part 3 yet, but who knows? Thanks for the feedback, Evelyn! I really appreciate it!