Part 1
Superb opening Michael
Honored, Steve!
It’s a grand piece Michael!
I'm glad. Really!
This has a very cool Twilight Zone vibe. Bring on part 2!
Thanks, Evelyn!
Nailed the intro! Nice work Michael.
Thanks, man. I’m glad you liked it!
Amazing, Cap. The vibe you've set is really impressive!
Thank you, hon! I’m glad you liked it.
Michael! The start of this — that first paragraph — was incredible! Such vivid and evocative imagery. I was gripped instantly. Looking forward to part 2! :)
You made me proud of it, bro. Thanks, I truly appreciate it ;-)
Good build-up, Michael.
Grazie, Portia, sono lieto che ti sia piaciuto. La tua opinione è preziosa per me.
It will be interesting to see where this goes…
I’ll try to wow you! Well, it’s just a hope :)
Really strong, atmospheric descriptions here, and such a creeping sense of unease! Looking forward to Part 2!
Thanks, Caitriana. I appreciate your kind words. I hope I can keep up that same level in part two!
Superb opening Michael
Honored, Steve!
It’s a grand piece Michael!
I'm glad. Really!
This has a very cool Twilight Zone vibe. Bring on part 2!
Thanks, Evelyn!
Nailed the intro! Nice work Michael.
Thanks, man. I’m glad you liked it!
Amazing, Cap. The vibe you've set is really impressive!
Thank you, hon! I’m glad you liked it.
Michael! The start of this — that first paragraph — was incredible! Such vivid and evocative imagery. I was gripped instantly. Looking forward to part 2! :)
You made me proud of it, bro. Thanks, I truly appreciate it ;-)
Good build-up, Michael.
Grazie, Portia, sono lieto che ti sia piaciuto. La tua opinione è preziosa per me.
It will be interesting to see where this goes…
I’ll try to wow you! Well, it’s just a hope :)
Really strong, atmospheric descriptions here, and such a creeping sense of unease! Looking forward to Part 2!
Thanks, Caitriana. I appreciate your kind words. I hope I can keep up that same level in part two!