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Bryan Beal's avatar

Nice! Got me right there.

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Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Thanks, Bryan! "There" is a good spot in the space-time :)

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Mkwawa shujaa's avatar

The repetition of "there is peace for me" gives it a meditative, almost prayer-like quality. Lovely poem :)

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Michael B. Morgan's avatar

We need a lot of peace! Thanks for the feedback Mk.

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Mkwawa shujaa's avatar

You are welcome

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Michael Edward's avatar

I really liked how there was two layers to this. The poem, and then the poem of only the capitalised letters. Nicely done sir :)

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Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Thanks, bro. Poetry isn't my strong suit, but I tried :)

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Michael Edward's avatar

I relate bro! You did well :)

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Marco Brunet's avatar

A poem within a POEM!

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Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Got it, bro ;-)

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Sandy Shaller's avatar

Michael, that was beautiful and heartfelt. I know, because as I read it, I felt it myself. Thank you and bless your heart.

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Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Thank you, Sandy. Really.

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