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Camila Hamel's avatar

Beautiful, Michael.

Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Thanks so much, Camila.

Heather Mulvenna's avatar

So much is in this piece. I love the way you write about the girl, what you observe, and use it to symbolize your own evolving perception about death and what we can handle. Great work!

Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Thanks so much, Heather. Really appreciate it!

Steve Kelsey's avatar

Very well done Michael

Charlotte Pendragon's avatar

You don’t read this deeply intense piece, you feel it! Wonderful Michael! 💜✨🤗

Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Thank you, Charlotte. Really.

Mkwawa shujaa's avatar

You’ve got a way of turning ordinary moments into something profound. And thank you for sharing something personal

Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Thanks, Mk, I’m glad you liked it.

Michael Edward's avatar

Powerful, profound, moving. This one was deep, Michael. You said so much in such a short piece. And I felt nearly every word.

Great work :)

Michael B. Morgan's avatar

You know what, bro? I was actually very torn about publishing it, but my wife insisted. Thank you for saying that "you felt nearly every word"; it means a lot.

Michael Edward's avatar

Glad to hear you have such a wise woman in your life.

And my pleasure bro :)

Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Yeah, she is. At least one of us holds wisdom at home :D

Michael Edward's avatar

Hehe :)

The Black Knight's avatar

Marvelously done.

The Black Knight's avatar

I really loved the conversation.

Michael B. Morgan's avatar

I'll tell my wife, since she's an avid reader of yours ;-)

The Black Knight's avatar

Woot! Thank her for her patronage :D Btw, may I ask who is her favorite character of mine?

Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Yep, that's the first thing I'll ask her when I get home. I'll let you know, bro ;-)

Portia's avatar

It's sad and it's fine. Good story, Michael.

Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Grazie, Portia. Onorato.